Up and down gently taking in the pleasure of being alive with my bare toes squelching the last drops of night’s dew In the mellow sun upon the green grass Firmly wedged in open-air comfort I found my niche on a swinging tyre The book by Vikram Seth deserved no less A reading ambience under open sky in a tiny park where roads crisscrossed by. A book about flowing life A piece of a world held close to heart like this re-discovered tyre swing of a childhood past. She found him and she wondered She lost him and yet she wondered Male multitude passers by accustomed to ogling but not at a woman on a kiddy swing, with reading glasses Lecherous hoots, snide looks as they passed, I wondered with her about the fresh batch of defective human hearts Do they lose if they walk on by respecting a fellow being on a harmless ride? What of this trail of seeing vamps in girls akin to a trend of abusing their own mothers? My kids made castles out of warm sand, their homage to innocent childhood happily oblivious to the gutter around, while I swung to Vikram’s hefty matrimonial packages the quagmires in the pages kept me hooked Women passing by tried to induce guilt Me being me, I refused to quit A little time in the sun and sand I deserve to treat myself to a book of life -a modest demand. There I swung with a dreamy smile. till the heroine got married off in style till the most suitable boy came to fetch us home.
What a beautiful moment. I used to take walks to college and they were so peaceful except for the men stopping and shouting pervy comments. I have never been bothered in the park though. I have never read this book it sounds interesting =)
Must warn you Blaga that it is a heavy weight book, one of the longest novels ever published in the English language! It is a story of four families (with innumerable characters ) and describes a mother’s quest to find a suitable groom to marry her daughter. Thanks for liking the poem .
This is lovely, the way you reflect on such simple things, swinging and reading – and how they are viewed by others. And I love how you connect the content of the novel into your thoughts as the poem unfolds.
I could picture you , stubbornly refusing to budge despite the curious and lecherous and “guilt inducing” bypassers. Makes me want to quote Shelley here…….”Hail to you blithe spirit………..
Like a high-born maiden
In a palace tower,
Soothing her love-laden
Soul in secret hour
With music sweet as love, which overflows her bower:”…..More of such happy times to you.:-)
Shelley! really ! I am honoured 🙂 ,(floating in space actually)beyond words.Thank you, Nice to read that quote here since this one also contains a bookish essence.
treat yourself to a book of life,
love the line, well done.
Happy Rally.
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Thank you Jingle.
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Love the tale told in this piece. Nice job!
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Thank you poetryroad.
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a gentle story interspersed with powerful thoughts. well done.
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Thank you Joss.
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Vikram Seth is one of the writers to read in India.
Nice story 🙂
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Thanks Harish . This is one of my favourite books -” A suitable boy”.
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What a beautiful moment. I used to take walks to college and they were so peaceful except for the men stopping and shouting pervy comments. I have never been bothered in the park though. I have never read this book it sounds interesting =)
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Thank you mindlovemisery, I know the scene you describe. Hope you read the book someday .
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Thanks for introducing this book Reena, I’ll look to find it! The poem is a little gem, reality in poetry! Well done!
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Must warn you Blaga that it is a heavy weight book, one of the longest novels ever published in the English language! It is a story of four families (with innumerable characters ) and describes a mother’s quest to find a suitable groom to marry her daughter. Thanks for liking the poem .
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The way you’ve written is one to be adored..amazing poetry as usual…Thanks for share………
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Thank you pure2 core!
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This is lovely, the way you reflect on such simple things, swinging and reading – and how they are viewed by others. And I love how you connect the content of the novel into your thoughts as the poem unfolds.
Richard
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Thanks Richard for reading and really getting the spirit of the poem.
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Wonderful homage to the book, which has been on my list for sometime. I look forward to digging into it this some.
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Thank you Jamie -it is a wonderful book but really needs time to be dug into.
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Keep up your imPERVious spirit–love the flow and the positive outlook. Positive well-written poetry is a rarity indeed.
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Thanks Wordcoaster-it is a great compliment!
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I could picture you , stubbornly refusing to budge despite the curious and lecherous and “guilt inducing” bypassers. Makes me want to quote Shelley here…….”Hail to you blithe spirit………..
Like a high-born maiden
In a palace tower,
Soothing her love-laden
Soul in secret hour
With music sweet as love, which overflows her bower:”…..More of such happy times to you.:-)
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Shelley! really ! I am honoured 🙂 ,(floating in space actually)beyond words.Thank you, Nice to read that quote here since this one also contains a bookish essence.
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well done!!
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Thanks Becca, always glad to see you here!
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Your poem reminds me of the simple pleasures in life that we once did a long time ago. Your poem is quite peaceful.
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Thank you Kagenohime!–so glad that it reminded you of nice things in life.
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“happily oblivious to the gutter around”
This is one of the gifts of childhood. All in one little line. You nailed it. Awesome.
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Thank you Janice-for your lovely review.
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